Writing201 Day 1: Water, Haiku, Simile

Ripples like creases
On the fabric of the lake
Boats iron them out

2 thoughts on “Writing201 Day 1: Water, Haiku, Simile”

Safar Fiertze says:

February 16, 2015 at 17:33

I like it – wonderful simile.

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- Laura says:
  
  February 16, 2015 at 18:33
  
  Thank you 🙂 I found this a little difficult at first as I don’t write many haiku poems, so that’s great to hear!
  
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