Writing201 Day 3: Trust, Acrostic, Internal Rhyme

Fading and broken, what once was unspoken
And true is now dead. There’s pain here instead.
I cannot believe I was once so naive
To think you wanted me; though now I can see
Her shadow at the door. My faith is no more.

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3 thoughts on “Writing201 Day 3: Trust, Acrostic, Internal Rhyme

  1. I like that ending. The reference to the shadow, it’s like the evidence that there is someone else. A dad piece. But that was a very effective finishing line.

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