Sweetness
That makes something already good
Just a little better
As though it needs it;
Too, a pet name:
One to inspire passion,
Daydreams and joy,
But in reality
Its what he calls me
When he’s done something wrong.
A response to Mara Eastern’s Poetry 101 Rehab.
My apologies Lara that was supposed to go into Mara’s comments!! Seems I am also a bit challenged when it comes to putting things in the right place from a foreign country! Enjoyed your post by the way 🙂
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Haha that’s okay 🙂
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That one was a fun one to write and a challenging one to post. Coming to you from China where wordpress is blocked 🙂 http://wp.me/p3EbHY-8E.
Enjoy
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Nice!
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Thank you!
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I like this 🙂
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Thanks 🙂 It was fun to write!
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I like it how the poem begins in a bright tone and then, when the reader least suspects it, turns into its dark ending… A great piece!
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Thanks 🙂
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